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My first ever songs written, please give me a honest feedback i.e. what I did wrong, what I did right, and were I can improve, thanks.

3 upvotes • Itchy_Knowledge6610

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Does anyone know how to write a song about rebellious kid?

3 upvotes • Tammysmith2k1

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How could I have improved these lyrics?

3 upvotes • BlindedByWildDogs

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Got the intro, but how to expand from there?

3 upvotes • Seek3r1

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Any advice for vocals on something like this?

3 upvotes • t0eCaster

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Song about my girlfriend

3 upvotes • SortaRaygun

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Hard to find mix that I like in ear buds, car stereo, & within GarageBand…also, any feedback is welcome, thx

3 upvotes • Unique_Ad6231

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I feel like I'm not musically proficient enough, but I don't quite know how to improve my songs, how do i?

3 upvotes • MajorBillyJoelFan

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This is my first full song I’ve written and produced.

3 upvotes • wokeuplookinlikethis

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3 upvotes • PossibilityForward68

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Title	Upvotes	Author	Mark as read	Favorited	Rating	Add to a list
My first ever songs written, please give me a honest feedback i.e. what I did wrong, what I did right, and were I can improve, thanks.	3	Itchy_Knowledge6610
Does anyone know how to write a song about rebellious kid?	3	Tammysmith2k1
How could I have improved these lyrics?	3	BlindedByWildDogs
Got the intro, but how to expand from there?	3	Seek3r1
Any advice for vocals on something like this?	3	t0eCaster
Song about my girlfriend	3	SortaRaygun
Hard to find mix that I like in ear buds, car stereo, & within GarageBand…also, any feedback is welcome, thx	3	Unique_Ad6231
I feel like I'm not musically proficient enough, but I don't quite know how to improve my songs, how do i?	3	MajorBillyJoelFan
This is my first full song I’ve written and produced.	3	wokeuplookinlikethis
Seeking Feedback	3	PossibilityForward68