/u/MysticalSword270's posts in /r/writers
I've just finished my first manuscript (42k words) and wanted to post the first chapter for some feedback. I realise some names are tacky and need changing (This project has been going on since I was 9 and am now 17), but I would very much appreciate criticism, what I did right, anything!
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